A fews things I notice, I hope you dont mind the critique. Perhaps you had bad reference? I think the head shape is off. You didnt show enough forehead. I'm not seeing what you were trying to go for with the eyebrows. I dont think his nose is that simple, theres more mass at the bottom. The major problem thats throwing me off is the mouth and chin area, its not the right structure and there could have been more mouth expression.
But, I'm only saying this because you asked, I'm sure you'll do another one thats spot on.
I saw this caricature and immediately new who it was before I had a chance to read the caption above it. So these guys can give you tips on how to make a "better" one, but I identified it as being him straight off the bat, so your definitely doing something right here.
I think it's enough to know who it is but isn't as strong as it could have been. but at the same time, I like the silliness of your solutions. as sometimes when you try to go too close to getting likeness it just becomes another "solid by the book caricature" that looks exactly like them but isn't as fun. I like when you simplify things more and is something I am trying to force myself to doing more instead of trying to nail every nuance of the person.
but yeah, I think you missed some stuff but still keep that fun silly vibe of the sketch.
and I think brian should critque more often, he's too quiet with that stuff. and it's good stuff.
I don't know. What do you think of the likeness? I'm not a hundred percent sure what I think of this one.
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Having seen the title, I can see it. But if you hadn't put the name in the title, I doubt I would have ever figured it out.
A fews things I notice, I hope you dont mind the critique. Perhaps you had bad reference? I think the head shape is off. You didnt show enough forehead. I'm not seeing what you were trying to go for with the eyebrows. I dont think his nose is that simple, theres more mass at the bottom.
The major problem thats throwing me off is the mouth and chin area, its not the right structure and there could have been more mouth expression.
But, I'm only saying this because you asked, I'm sure you'll do another one thats spot on.
ps. I like the hair
that's true, you will do another one that's spot on.
maybe you just wanted to fight with this sketch
i've done that before.
I saw this caricature and immediately new who it was before I had a chance to read the caption above it.
So these guys can give you tips on how to make a "better" one, but I identified it as being him straight off the bat, so your definitely doing something right here.
Yeah, you guys.
Sein-failed
hahha. Thats a good one. I'm LOL-ing over here.
He actually looks a bit like one of the bigheads from Rocko's Modern Life.
ha ha. sein-failed. ha ha. good one.
I think it's enough to know who it is but isn't as strong as it could have been. but at the same time, I like the silliness of your solutions. as sometimes when you try to go too close to getting likeness it just becomes another "solid by the book caricature" that looks exactly like them but isn't as fun. I like when you simplify things more and is something I am trying to force myself to doing more instead of trying to nail every nuance of the person.
but yeah, I think you missed some stuff but still keep that fun silly vibe of the sketch.
and I think brian should critque more often, he's too quiet with that stuff. and it's good stuff.
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